Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, October 08, 2006




mrtva linija
travnik prepreden
s pajkovo svilo

13 Comments:

At 8/10/06 8:50 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is excellent!

If I might make one suggestion, it would be to bring this into the present tense, and add an article to "meadow", as in

"the meadow intertwines"

But that's just me. :)

Polona, this is soooo good.

 
At 8/10/06 9:17 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, aurora (i edited the haiga as you suggested).

 
At 8/10/06 10:12 PM, Blogger Margie said...

Very lovely Polona!
I enjoy the translation very much!
Have a great day!

 
At 9/10/06 9:05 AM, Blogger Amalendu said...

Another lovely one Polona...
I was thinking, is it a Disabled Connection... or something like vivacious connection...

 
At 9/10/06 3:01 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I see this very clearly!!

 
At 9/10/06 4:48 PM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

in my line "disabled connection" is a no-no! :)

great picture and words! love your bilingual posts.

 
At 9/10/06 11:29 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, margie!
you're not saying you understand the language spoken by less than 2 million people, are you? (just kidding :))

thank you, tim!

amalendu: thank you. well, i was without internet (and the phone line) most of the sunday due to maintenance works (or so the telecom company explained)

just human factor, i'm afraid (would like to believe spiders helped enable it)
thank you, charlie.

with the aid of visine? :)
thank you, pat!

dsnake1: good for you! we're not that lucky :(
many thanks, and i'm glad you liked the bilingual posting.

 
At 9/10/06 11:56 PM, Blogger MB said...

You draw the connections! ;-)

 
At 10/10/06 4:38 AM, Blogger Masago said...

I also like how the first line is highlighted by the dark horizon.

 
At 10/10/06 5:01 AM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

It's so green!

 
At 10/10/06 9:49 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, mb, you're most kind!

focusing on technicalities, masago? :)
thank you.

andrew: well, a lot of rain in august, and just enough to keep the clover fresh afterwards, and it remains green :)

 
At 12/10/06 3:41 AM, Blogger Masago said...

The little things in a work of art all add up. Besides, others have already covered the non-technical aspects. :-)

 
At 12/10/06 8:33 PM, Blogger polona said...

it's ok, masago, i dig your approach :)
thank you.

 

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