Now I can observe all these fallen leaves... Every time I see the new creation of yours, I feel this is the best I have seen, even when I know for sure, tomorrow,s would be another such... It is lovely Polona...
thank you for the feedback, floots! i love these moments, too (as you may well know)
ah yes, charlie, but how could we appreciate light without the darkness...
thank you, don. glad it worked.
hototogisu, thank you!
many thanks, pat!
thank you so much, amalendu! i'm aware that every next post can't outdo the previous one, and especially when posting daily the quality is almost impossible to maintain.
ok, so the majority seems to like the haiku/haiga as is; no changes then :)
Polona, the only thing I would suggest (and I'm not even sure myself), is removing the word "first". It would be less repetitive and more implied then. But this is only a thought.
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i don't know... may change it later to avoid double kigo (but was happy to see the swans return).
This is lovely!
Love this one Polona!
Beautiful!
i love these quiet lakeside moments
and this pic/poem captures one perfectly
thank you
Lovely and said with such wonderful images.
very, very nice polona.
Perfectly captured!!
Now I can observe all these fallen leaves...
Every time I see the new creation of yours, I feel this is the best I have seen, even when I know for sure, tomorrow,s would be another such...
It is lovely Polona...
thank you, aurora!
margie, thank you!
thank you for the feedback, floots!
i love these moments, too (as you may well know)
ah yes, charlie, but how could we appreciate light without the darkness...
thank you, don. glad it worked.
hototogisu, thank you!
many thanks, pat!
thank you so much, amalendu!
i'm aware that every next post can't outdo the previous one, and especially when posting daily the quality is almost impossible to maintain.
ok, so the majority seems to like the haiku/haiga as is; no changes then :)
Polona, the only thing I would suggest (and I'm not even sure myself), is removing the word "first". It would be less repetitive and more implied then. But this is only a thought.
You've captured the edge of something beautifully!
i like the picture with the poem.
Very nice...more than fallen leaves now too.
Lovely. Very decadent!
thank you for the feedback, aurora!
i'll consider your suggestion, but will leave it for now.
thank you, mb!
thank you, pecos blue, and welcome!
it must be the time of year... thank you, masago!
natalia, thank you!
Very nice...
thank you, kuan!
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