Ladybird Haiku

Saturday, October 14, 2006



jesenski veter
krakanje se spušča
skozi vonj sena

14 Comments:

At 15/10/06 1:18 AM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

beautiful... words and photo

 
At 15/10/06 3:54 AM, Blogger steve said...

I grew up playing in barns with the smell of hay - the ladder looks inviting (although just I spent most of the day on a ladder repairing a roof!) - I like the combination of the scent of hay and sound of the crow.

 
At 15/10/06 4:30 AM, Blogger Masago said...

An excellent combination of images in the words and supported by the picture.

 
At 15/10/06 9:03 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Love it. Crows descending down the ladder. Imagination soaring...

 
At 15/10/06 4:52 PM, Blogger MMM said...

Polona- I really like this...puts me right there in the moment.

 
At 15/10/06 5:09 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is excellent.

 
At 15/10/06 6:06 PM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

lovely picture!
i can imagine the wind rushing down those rungs. (not through the window!)

 
At 15/10/06 8:36 PM, Blogger Margie said...

Wonderful one Polona!

 
At 15/10/06 10:56 PM, Blogger polona said...

charlie: thank you. some sensory impulses do have the power to take us into the past :)

andrew: many thanks.

steve: i'm glad this brought some memories. ladders do have a certain appeal (though i've never been to keen on climbing them :))
thank you!

masago: thank you!

borut: as long as crows are mentioned... :) at least they can always use wings...
thank you!

mmm: i'm glad this worked for you... thank you!

aurora: many thanks!

dsnake1: thank you! no windows there :)

margie: thank you!

 
At 16/10/06 12:34 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Reminds me of time spent in my uncles barn. Good memories, smells and good poem!!

 
At 16/10/06 1:35 PM, Blogger Amalendu said...

Excellent photograph and write Polona...

 
At 16/10/06 9:56 PM, Blogger MB said...

This reminds me of my childhood, too. You've woven so many senses into this — touch, hearing, smell — that it is very alive to me.

 
At 16/10/06 11:20 PM, Blogger polona said...

looks like i stirred some memories with this one :)
thank you, pat!

amalendu: thank you as always!

 
At 16/10/06 11:21 PM, Blogger polona said...

mb: i'm glad you could find yourself in it, too. thank you!

 

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