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posted by polona @ 23:12
Sunday, October 29, 2006
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16 Comments:
Beautiful in its poignancy, Polona! And artistically, just right.
Ditto Rorie. Even your text placement is perfect.
Perfect Polona!
Yeah, poignant came to my mind too.
do i detect some pain in those words?
great pic too!
loved this
it works so well as a naturalistic piece
but
(as others have said)
it is pevaded by a sense of personification and sadness
The words is working well Polona, but no offence I don't hope you have cut the tree just for this purpose - nah just joking.
And the last few poems have been I see that floots use the word pervaded (which exact meaning I only could find at Oxford University Press (oup.com))by sensitive feelings but it gives the right words for the feeling these last poems has given(I think - at least for me)- unaffected hold on.
Poignant ... in its depths pain hidden by the leaves ... perhaps even preserved in the stump.
I can relate to this.
Like leaving flowers on a grave. Yep, works on all levels!!
aurora: much appreciated as always. thank you!
matt: ditto above.
kai, thank you!
margie: perfect is not easy to achieve. thank you!
masago: there are moments...
dsnake: only temporary, but as you know, pain is an essential part of life... thank you!
floots: thank you!
for some reason seeing felled trees always make me sad (these were doomed anyway as the bark beetle had done its job too effectively but still...)
ashi: i would never... :)
well, i'm fine, thanks. it's just that... this time of year does bring all kinds of strange thoughts to my mind...
trinitystar: thank you. i suppose anyone who has lost someone close can relate...
pat: kind of... i prefer the nature's way though, especially now that so many people will be showing off on the graveyards for just that one day (november 1, all saints' day, is a holiday in slovenia, a day dedicated to our deceased or that's how it should be)
thank you, pat!
charlie: yep.
perfect!
thank you, andrew!
Stark but true!
gautami: thank you!
I cried reading this-
Incredibly poignant
Silvermoon
solvermoon: that is about the best compliment i could have gotten... many thanks and sorry it made you cry...
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