Ladybird Haiku

Monday, October 23, 2006



jesensko polje
en sam metulj se dviga
k večerni zarji

18 Comments:

At 23/10/06 11:20 PM, Blogger Matt said...

Lots of cool layers, Polona.

 
At 24/10/06 12:39 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

A last dip in color before the dark. Excellent Polona!!

 
At 24/10/06 3:18 AM, Blogger Kai said...

lovely

 
At 24/10/06 3:37 AM, Blogger Margie said...

Just beautiful Polona!

 
At 24/10/06 3:54 AM, Blogger Plus Ultra said...

Your poetry cause the butterfly (me, the reader) to rise aginst the setting sun and gives me hope that there is always more beyond today, tonight!!!!Lovely!

 
At 24/10/06 11:25 AM, Blogger The Site Administrator said...

this piece is as beautiful as the butterfly in the photograph.

 
At 24/10/06 4:55 PM, Blogger John McDonald said...

nice,nice
john

 
At 24/10/06 5:51 PM, Blogger Bill said...

Another gem, polona. I stumbled a bit over "autumnal" (rather than "autumn"), but I think it adds something.

 
At 24/10/06 6:16 PM, Blogger MB said...

I am amazed at the beauty you find everywhere. This is lovely.

 
At 24/10/06 9:09 PM, Blogger Kai said...

thank u polona

hugs

i hope u notice theres a cute guy
who comments your blog...
:-)

 
At 24/10/06 10:43 PM, Blogger Kai said...

hehe

too bad he doesn't have a blog.:-(

but he's a cutie

 
At 24/10/06 11:18 PM, Blogger polona said...

much appreciated, matt. thank you!

thank you, pat! craving the light...

thank you, bearded!

sweet kai, thank you!

thanks, margie!

great comment, plus. thank you!

i also had your butterfly haiku in mind when writing this... thank you, sb!

thanks, john!

bill: tha k you! i would usually use "autumn" but for some reason beyond my understanding "autumnal" felt right in this case... i'm glad you think it worked.

mb: i find your work amazing, so i value your words. thank you.

hehe kai... i agree. :-)
hugs

 
At 25/10/06 2:52 AM, Blogger Masago said...

A beaut! I also love how you again have matched the lettering with the subject.

 
At 25/10/06 9:51 PM, Blogger polona said...

much appreciated, masago. thanks!

 
At 26/10/06 2:37 AM, Blogger Schrodingers cat said...

amazing words...and i love the picture! they make a sweet little pair.

 
At 27/10/06 7:08 PM, Blogger iamnasra said...

How I love butterfly
Nestling on flower
giving love as it can

 
At 27/10/06 7:20 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Love this one!

 
At 27/10/06 10:11 PM, Blogger polona said...

schrodingers cat: thank you. butterflies are special...

nasra: that's lovely. thank you!

thank you, aurora!

 

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