posted by polona @ 23:26
Wednesday, October 18, 2006
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16 Comments:
This one is excellent! Polona, truly, one of your best!
I love this kind of tanka! You've inspired me, so maybr I'll come up with one. :)
Just beautiful!
Love this one Polona!
Amazing juxtaposition of concepts. Your creative genius at its best on this one.
Polona, this is really interesting. You've packed this — photo and words — with images that connote edges or transitions or movement, and darkness. I enjoyed thinking about it.
I get the image of bats stirring the mix of lost and found in between day and night. Excellent!!
I think there are some 100 ways to say beautiful, fantastic, wonderful etc. and I feel I have exhausted most of these...
I mean it Polona...
Truly capturing the owrds and tangling with the image..Thank you so much for your visit ...you open my door to haiku ...for I love to stir in it glimses
Interesting waka, or tanka.
First lines 1-3 and suddenly added lines 4-5. A strong combination!
i really don't know what else to say... i really appreciate your words. thank you, aurora!
charlie, i think that's the story of life...some friends you find, others you lose - in no particular order. then there are those you find and then lose, and the precious few you seem to have lost but find them again... if that makes any sense.
as to the bats, i'm quite fond of the little boogers. :o)
andrew: thank you. looking forward to your tanka :)
i appreciate that, margie. thank you!
masago: wow! thank you for your high praise!
mb: i love your comments, they're at least as good as my poetry :) many thanks!
pat: great image. thank you!
amalendu: your words mean a lot. thank you!
nasra: it's been a pleasure. you're welcome to peek in any time.
tikkis: thank you. i'm glad this worked.
Powerful!
polona, how do you come out with these fab pictures every day?
i like anything with twilight and bats. :)
don, thank you!
dsnake1: i can't really answer your question. they just appear (or sometimes not... but then i try to combine something from the archives)
i agree, bats are fabulous little critters (we don't have any large species here :))
After the crows, a beautiful series! But I like the dark mood of this one in particular.
I love this!
yes, i imagine you would. thank you, borut!
thank you, pris!
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