i'll skip the slovene version this time due to awkward phrasing.
here's pat paulk's poem that gave me the idea for this haiku/haiga.
posted by polona @ 22:37
Tuesday, October 24, 2006
i'll skip the slovene version this time due to awkward phrasing.
here's pat paulk's poem that gave me the idea for this haiku/haiga.
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17 Comments:
This works better as a haiku. What kind of camera are you using?
Another beauty from you Polona..
as was Pat's.
Love your lines...
and the color of the leaves...
beautiful!
Margie
maybe our mutual friend like Aurora could help him to make a blog & we can all comment....
what do u think?
he's really adorable....
by the way i love ur haiku
its beautiful...
i appreciate that, matt.
just a compact Canon Powershot A620.
that's very kind of you, margie!
thank you as always!
thank you, sweet kai.
let's just wait and see... ok?
ok
I want to correct my first comment. I meant to say that this works better as a haiku or haiga like you've got it, than it would as a longer poem. I don't know if I expressed that clearly.
Your camera has cool features. It can even shoot underwater. You do good work, Polona.
Polona, you mastered the thought perfectly!! But, then, you always do!!
a fiery palette of october colours.
Lovely!
very nice! I love the photo, too.
Very effective, Polona.
thanks again, matt.
yes, i know what you mean. it's difficult to compare free verse to haiku as they use different techniques. i've always been trying to express myself as concise as possible, even before discovering haiku, and that seems to work best for me.
i like my camera and haven't yet explored all its features but would like to purchase a slr in the near future...
bearded critic, thank you!
you're most kind, pat. thank you!
thank you, dsnake1!
thanks, andrew!
mb, thank you!
charlie: as i said before, i love that little camera. and thank you as always for your support, i really appreciate it.
Nice...I saw Pat's inspiration right off.
i reckon you did. thank you, masago!
Ditto Matt and Bearded. Perfectly succinct! :)
thank you, aurora!
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