walking slowly
through the chestnut shade
on a sultry afternoon
a pigeon coos
as I pass
posted by polona @ 21:05
Friday, July 28, 2006
through the chestnut shade
on a sultry afternoon
a pigeon coos
as I pass
through the chestnut shade
on a sultry afternoon
a pigeon coos
as I pass
12 Comments:
O Beautiful!!! :o)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the giraffe & Snake! :oD
So very nice Polona!
As always!
Nicely done.:)
Nice image (hopefully the pigeon keeps its distance and doesn't do more the coo). :-)
I can picture this all. Nicely captured in words and mental images.
thanks, jon!
thak you, margie - as always!
aurora, thank you!
he had no accent as far as i recall :)
and you're welcome, charlie.
thanks, vaughn. actually, i was the one keeping the distance :)
thank you, don. always a pleasure to see you around.
Beautiful haiku.
I especially like "chesnut shade"
and hearing that pigeon coo.
Well done and slowly walking it would be in the shade of a hot day, and nice to be noticed too even by pigeons.
silvermoon - thank you.
technically this is a tanka, a slightly longer form than haiku
but pleased you liked it :)
thank you, ashi. there are pigeons and there are "pigeons"...
Very good Polona!!
thank you (as always), pat!
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