oppressive heat
a sparrow pecks a crumb
in the underpass
posted by polona @ 23:27
Wednesday, July 19, 2006
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8 Comments:
Well done! Polona, you're just so good at these!
Realism in haiku. Good work, polona.
Shad, shade, a cafe with shade!! Love it!!
thank you, aurora! you're too kind (but don't stop :))
bill - thank you. just an observation that happens to work...
charlie, you also get graffitti and smell of urine for free :)
seems we're all looking for shade these days... thank you, pat!
I especially like how L2 is worded.
thanks, vaughn.
I can relate Polona. Nice one.
thank you, don!
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