Ladybird Haiku

Monday, July 24, 2006

giving some change
to the beggar
this muggy monday
his toothless smile follows me
all the way home

At 24/7/06 10:43 PM, Anonymous said...: This one is excellent! Well done, Polona!
At 24/7/06 10:59 PM, floots said...: kind as well as talented :)
At 25/7/06 12:09 AM, Pat Paulk said...: Ditto Floots!!
At 25/7/06 1:42 AM, Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...: Now, that is a picture!
At 25/7/06 5:43 AM, Masago said...: Lovely ending.
At 25/7/06 7:23 PM, Margie said...: Loved this one!
At 25/7/06 10:29 PM, polona said...: thank you, aurora!
he even told me a few (bad) jokes...

much appreciated, floots. thank you!

thank you, pat!

cheers, don!

thanks, vaughn!

charlie :O)

thanks, samuru!
At 28/7/06 6:18 AM, J. Andrew Lockhart said...: Brilliant! I love it--
At 28/7/06 9:08 PM, polona said...: andrew and tim - thank you both for commenting!
At 29/7/06 12:22 AM, polona said...: you're most kind, jon. thank you!
At 30/7/06 1:59 AM, Anonymous said...: Sparkling words of social conscience. "his toothless smile follows me"- sigh- yes