Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, May 07, 2006

a story told gazillion times




blossoming season
storm clouds fill the horizon
as we gently touch
falling in love with a man
loved by another woman

12 Comments:

At 7/5/06 11:01 PM, Blogger Ashi said...

That's right I have heard that before - but anyway, good poem

 
At 8/5/06 2:39 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well done!

 
At 8/5/06 4:27 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Definitely storm clouds a "gazillion" times over. Excellent poem and picture!!

 
At 8/5/06 5:00 AM, Blogger Unique Designs from Zazzle said...

this is great

 
At 8/5/06 6:11 AM, Blogger Masago said...

What a photo!

 
At 8/5/06 5:32 PM, Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

I love lilac. This picture complements your beautiful tanka. Complex emotion - masterfully expressed.

 
At 8/5/06 9:24 PM, Blogger polona said...

ashi, aurora, pat, shane, vaughn and natalia - thank you for reading and commenting.

natalia - i love lilac, too. they are now in full bloom here. i read about the superstition you have in russia - guess i'll be looking at the blossomseven more carefully :)

 
At 9/5/06 10:39 AM, Blogger Borut said...

A lovable one.

 
At 9/5/06 6:05 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, borut :)
nothing autobiographical, though...

 
At 10/5/06 1:07 AM, Blogger Kai said...

thats sweet

 
At 10/5/06 9:58 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, kai :)

 
At 15/5/06 10:57 PM, Blogger sangeet said...

Lovely Polona! Nice to be catching up with my reading..

Sangeet

 

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