Ladybird Haiku

Saturday, May 06, 2006

party over
dazed moths
under the lamp

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konec zabave
omamljene vešče
pod žarometom

4 Comments:

At 7/5/06 7:35 AM, Blogger floots said...

"dazed moths" is a wonderful way of describing post-party people

 
At 7/5/06 11:08 PM, Blogger polona said...

floots, thank you. actally i first saw the moths and felt kind of sorry for them, the analogy with the people came to my mind later.
the haiku is an edited oldie :)

 
At 8/5/06 5:07 AM, Blogger Unique Designs from Zazzle said...

agreed - great double meaning!

 
At 8/5/06 9:20 PM, Blogger polona said...

shane, thank you.

 

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