Ladybird Haiku

Wednesday, May 03, 2006

ambulance siren
a butterfly flutters
above the street

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sirena rešilca
metulj se spreletava
nad ulico

12 Comments:

At 3/5/06 10:47 PM, Blogger polona said...

i wrote this a few days ago only to find out today a friend's parents were hit by a car on a pedestrian crossing. they're both seriously injured but their life is not at risk.

 
At 3/5/06 11:25 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

BEAUTIFUL PICTURES!
Great Haiku's! :o)
AWESOME WORK!

 
At 4/5/06 12:15 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well done, Polona.

 
At 4/5/06 4:12 AM, Blogger Bill said...

The butterfly is a powerful symbol here, polona.

I wish you friends a speedy recovery.

 
At 4/5/06 7:54 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Polona I love the contrast between the ambulence and the butterfly. I, too, wish your friends parents a complete recovery.

 
At 4/5/06 8:55 AM, Blogger Ashi said...

This is very good Polona, even without the tragic event. Hope they recover quickly.

 
At 4/5/06 9:50 AM, Blogger floots said...

love the way in which this works as a literal picture but also as a comment on the fragility of our lives
thank you

 
At 4/5/06 2:10 PM, Blogger Pris said...

A wondeful ku. And what an eery coincidence. Hope they're okay soon, too!

 
At 4/5/06 8:22 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh, this is great. i like the idea of the fluttering wings along with the hurried ambulance. :)

 
At 4/5/06 9:00 PM, Blogger polona said...

jon, thank you for your visit. you have produced some amazing work yourself!

aurora, thank you :)

bill, thank you for the compliment and good wishes.

pat, thank you - on my behalf and my friend's.

ashi, thank you. we all do.

floots, you said this so beautifully. thank you.

pris, pleased to see you around. hope you are feeling better. thank you, too, for the compliment and good wishes.

ruthanne, thank you very much.

 
At 4/5/06 10:48 PM, Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

I love the way you've expressed the mood. Hope your friend's parents get well soon.

 
At 5/5/06 11:14 PM, Blogger polona said...

natalia, thank you. the recovery will take some time, but hopefully they'll be fine.

 

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