Ladybird Haiku

Thursday, December 21, 2006



tanka skorja
ledu na luži
zamegli odseve...
zaman čakam
na njegov klic

17 Comments:

At 21/12/06 5:57 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

You are on a roll! Well done, Polona. :)

 
At 21/12/06 7:52 PM, Blogger Grish said...

Brr! Wonderfully chilly polona! :)

 
At 21/12/06 7:56 PM, Blogger Margie said...

Love this one Polona!
Wonderful!

Margie

 
At 21/12/06 11:05 PM, Blogger Kai said...

ditto

 
At 21/12/06 11:38 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

WOW!!!! Winning a couple of awards really brings the gems out of you!!!

 
At 22/12/06 1:03 AM, Blogger Matt said...

Great association. Definitely well done.

 
At 22/12/06 3:45 AM, Blogger Masago said...

So sad.
Could he have written down the number wrong?

 
At 22/12/06 7:16 AM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love this one! My kind of tanka. :)

 
At 22/12/06 7:36 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Polona, please check your email ASAP. Thanks.

 
At 22/12/06 7:49 AM, Blogger starry said...

Loved this one Polona.you are so talented.

 
At 22/12/06 9:36 AM, Blogger Tikkis said...

This tanka of yours,
I have read it several times now,
- I like it.

 
At 22/12/06 10:05 AM, Blogger John McDonald said...

nice
john

 
At 22/12/06 11:06 AM, Blogger Ashi said...

Very good Polona - it reminds me of a Danish revue show song from long gone about waiting, waiting and waiting (in the rain mind you)for the one.

 
At 22/12/06 11:53 AM, Blogger trinitystar said...

wonderful Polona!
fits the picture
:o)

 
At 22/12/06 1:12 PM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

držim pesti, da se led zdebeli in da osevi pridejo varno do tebe...Bodi dobro.

 
At 22/12/06 7:42 PM, Blogger MB said...

Very nicely done! A chill on so many levels...

 
At 23/12/06 12:14 AM, Blogger polona said...

aurora: always good to hear that. thanks :)
p.s.
wilco.

grish: thanks. it was only chilly for a day or two...

margie: thank you. take care.

kai: :-)

pat: that's a most kind thing of you to say.
these are not really awards but it sure feels good to see your name on the top of a list :)

charlie: i was aiming for that efect. glad it worked (not based on recent facts, though).

matt: much appreciated. thank you.

masago: thank you. i guess we'll never know :)

andrew: i reckon it is. thank you!

starry nights: many thanks.

tikkis: kiitos, my friend :)

john: thank you.

ashi: thank you. yes, waiting can be depressing...

trinitystar: many thanks :)

neikka: hvala. ta tanka ne bazira na resničnosti :)

mb: thank you. as i said, i'm glad it conveys the message...

hi, bearded. you're right, it is not autobiographical. thank you for your kind words :)

 

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