Ladybird Haiku

Saturday, December 09, 2006



zimski dež
teža
njegovih besed

21 Comments:

At 10/12/06 1:02 AM, Blogger Ashi said...

wonderful photo Polona

 
At 10/12/06 1:13 AM, Blogger Margie said...

Amazing and beautiful polona!
This one I love!
Thank you!

Margie

 
At 10/12/06 2:38 AM, Blogger Grish said...

Wonderful. I love the rain...

 
At 10/12/06 3:25 AM, Blogger Bill said...

Playing catch-up, as usual, I have the pleasure of experiencing a number of these at one sitting. Consistently fine work, polona.

 
At 10/12/06 10:28 AM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

love the stark image, polona, gothic & dark. :) brings out the cold u are describing.

 
At 10/12/06 1:37 PM, Blogger Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

'the weight of his words...' they weigh on me... I like this one very much, Polona.

 
At 10/12/06 2:32 PM, Blogger Senile Butterfly said...

Good one, Polona.

 
At 10/12/06 2:40 PM, Blogger Senile Butterfly said...

Ooops! Sorry about the repeated comment. Blogger was playing up, and demanding multiple word verification.

 
At 10/12/06 2:48 PM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Kako modra misel, Polona. jaz ljubim aforistiko in tvoji haikuji so poezija resnic in občutij.

Lepo.

 
At 10/12/06 7:08 PM, Blogger floots said...

stunning
one of your very best

 
At 10/12/06 11:10 PM, Blogger polona said...

ashi: ah, it's just the rain on my balcony... thank you.

margie: you're ever so kind. thank you!

grish: thank you. i'm not too fond of the rain but it doesn't annoy me as it used to anymore...

bearded: thank you.

bill: i'm glad you're enjoying my offerings. thank you for your compliments.

dsnake1: it's the season... thank you for liking this.

don: words can be a horrible weapon... thank you very much.

sb: yeah, blogger's been acting erratically these last few days... thank you (i deleted the repeated comments).

neikka: ja, senryu ni daleč od aforistike... in če se sprašuješ, senryu je soroden haikuju, le dase ukvara s človeško naravo v nasprotju s "pravim" haikujem, ki se predvsem ukvarja z naravo, čeprav so meje precej zabrisane...

john: thank you as always.

floots: that's a very kind thing to say... many thanks.

 
At 11/12/06 12:42 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

So different, but match so well--words and photo. I love it!!

 
At 11/12/06 4:05 AM, Blogger MB said...

I really like this one. Interesting photos, and words to match!

 
At 11/12/06 5:49 AM, Blogger Masago said...

Much to ponder in these. I have to say though that Winter rain here is a rare experience (it's mostly the solid variety these days).

 
At 11/12/06 9:16 AM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Hvala za razlago, Polona.

Nisem vedala tega, zares fino. Take haikuje imam najraje.

Bodi dobro in na še veliko takih verzov:)))

 
At 11/12/06 10:38 PM, Blogger polona said...

pat: glad to hear that from a master of words... thank you.

mb: thank you, i appreciate your words.

masago: thanks. no solid variety here yet and i can't say i miss it :)

neikka: you're welcome :)
mi je bilo v zadovoljstvo.

charlie: i've been trying not to :o)

 
At 12/12/06 3:14 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Heavy and depressing winter rains as his words....

 
At 12/12/06 5:28 AM, Blogger Marie-Hélène Raletz said...

You nailed the mood exquisitely.
Marie.

 
At 12/12/06 5:18 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Excellent! :)

 
At 12/12/06 8:30 PM, Blogger Matt said...

Perfect.

 
At 12/12/06 9:00 PM, Blogger polona said...

gautami: yes... could be that way...

marie: thank you for looking in and your kind words :)

aurora: thank you! :)

matt: ditto!

 

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