Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, November 12, 2006



novembrski popoldan
sonce se umakne
čez reko

16 Comments:

At 12/11/06 10:47 PM, Blogger Margie said...

This is sooo beautiful Polona!
I love it!

Margie:)

 
At 12/11/06 11:26 PM, Blogger Kai said...

it is....

hugs

 
At 12/11/06 11:28 PM, Blogger MB said...

Brr... lovely and chilly at the same time!

 
At 12/11/06 11:58 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!! :o)

 
At 13/11/06 12:07 AM, Blogger Matt said...

Cool capture, Polona.

Don't suppose there are any whales in that water, hmmm?

 
At 13/11/06 12:29 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

And the water patiently waits its return. Well done!!!

 
At 13/11/06 1:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Polona, this, and all the haiga below are simply perfect! You've got this down to an exquisite art form.

Please check your email.:)

 
At 13/11/06 2:33 AM, Blogger trinitystar said...

lovely to meditate on ... sitting by the river watching the sun in the Autumn afternoon ... going down and gently brushing its face against the water. :o)

 
At 13/11/06 2:56 AM, Blogger Masago said...

Beautiful.

 
At 13/11/06 5:25 AM, Blogger Amalendu said...

Lovely image Polona... the word 'withdraws' brings so much of poetry to the image.....

 
At 13/11/06 7:49 AM, Blogger Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

Nice!!!

 
At 13/11/06 1:15 PM, Blogger Pris said...

Ohhhhh....I like!

 
At 13/11/06 3:48 PM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

lovely piece, polona.

tell me i'm right : the next phase of day is evening, and the sunlight is starting to retreat? :)

 
At 13/11/06 7:30 PM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Novembrska noč
opojna čaša strasti
do jutra, do dne...


Krasen haiku, Polona.
Pišeš prej v anlčeščini ali slovenščini?

 
At 14/11/06 4:44 AM, Blogger Bill said...

"withdraws" is a wonderful choice, polona.

 
At 14/11/06 8:58 PM, Blogger polona said...

margie: thank you so much :)

kai: thanks :-]
hugs

mb: thank you. still too warm here, it's just that the days are geting so short...

jon: thank you! haven't seen your blog updated in a long time...

bearded: thank you!

janet: much appreciated. thank you!

matt: thank you as always.
whales? i suppose fat ladies don't count...

pat: the water never waits, it flows south... :)
but the stones and the trees do.
thank you!

sb: thank you.

aurora: youre words are much appreciated. thank you!

trinitystar: in the weather we're having that would be a great thing to do... thnak you.

masago: thank you!

charlie: the seasons have gone mad... it's way too warm here to really feel the cold (which i clearly felt at your smoky mountains pics)

amalendu: thank you. i was a bit suspitious about using that word but seems to have worked well

don: thank you!!

tim s: thank you!

pris: many thanks!

floots: cheers

dsnake1: yes, you're right. and days are getting substantially shorter as winter approaches...

neikka-neikko: hvala za prekrasen verz.
morda malce presenetljivo, a velika večina verzov najprej nastane v angleščini (očitno ima moja muza čudne navade...) :)

bill: i'm really glad it works. wasn't too sure about the choice...
thank you.

 

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