the sky spoke

dark clouds gathered
on the northern horizon
herded by the wind
came rushing through
the august afternoon
crying cleansing raindrops
over languished flowers
setting the stage
for the daylight’s farewell.
a single star twinkled
before its time.
the sky spoke to me last night
but i couldn’t understand
now i know
it was you
coming
to say goodbye
for Marjan, my favourite uncle
14 Comments:
wonderful!
(i'm so moved i've used a punctuation mark) :)
Very powerful and moving!
Thank you for sharing.
Oh Polona... this is beautiful!!!!
Polona, I'm sorry. A beautiful way to say goodbye.
Sorry to hear of your loss Polona. You captured the feelings you are experiencing beautifully. Thank you.
Moving.
everyone, thank you for reading and commenting.
i know the poem is hardly more than a rough draft, but thought i should post it anyway...
Glad you did Polona - very good and strong in expression .
Breathtaking tribute from title and photo throughout your poem!
(I wish such words did not arise from sorrow.)
ashi and silvermoon - thank you!
Powerful images...lovely...
kuan gung - thank you, and welcome!
Awwwwwww
I think our uncle would be proud of u Pika.
It really is beautifull!
hi sis!
so glad you came by... thanks.
i think he knows...
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