sudden shower
bursting into blossom
umbrellas
or
sudden shower
umbrellas
bursting into blossom
*
nenadna ploha
na ulici vzcvetijo
dežniki
posted by polona @ 22:52
Monday, April 03, 2006
bursting into blossom
umbrellas
or
sudden shower
umbrellas
bursting into blossom
*
nenadna ploha
na ulici vzcvetijo
dežniki
7 Comments:
polona, I might either omit the dash here or put it at the end of l.1. Very nice, though, in acknowledging the beauty of the everyday.
Sweet image!
thanks for your suggestion,, bill. i chose to omit the dash as i didn't have it in the slovene version anyway.
wow, you are quick!
thank you, aurora!
beautiful
frost here
and
the flowers look sorry for themselves
so these were good to see/read
Polona,
Very lovely. Umbrellas may work better as a pivot if used as Line 2.
alenka, thank you. the hellebore really looks like a tiny umbrella, doesn't it?
floots, sorry for your flowers.
some bad weather (even possibility of snow) forecast here, too.
thanks.
denis, thank you for your suggestion. i'll consider revising the ku. umbrellas may really work better as a pivot in L2 in the english version (not in slovene, though).
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