eruption
pomladne plohe
izbruh
rasti
posted by polona @ 23:02
Thursday, March 30, 2006
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9 Comments:
Beautiful!
it must be on the way
(please) :)
I have to say that I don't hold with this haiku style. I think a haiku should have seventeen syllables - in three lines - 5, 7 and 5.
What do you think?
Nice site. I keep seeing your photo popping up on other sites - so I thought I'd drop by.
aurura, you are ever so kind!
alenka, hope they would... but the busy schedule is taking its toll, i'm experiencing sort of a writer's block.
floots, i would love to send it over to you, but can only do it in this virtual space...
roger, thanks for dropping by.
as to your question about my opinion regarding 5-7-5 haiku, well, i think that's kind of... obsolete. one cannot really compare syllables to onji, the japanese sound beats.
i prefer substance over form, and if something can be expressed in, say, 11 rather than 17 syllables, so be it. of course, everyone is free to use whatever form suits them best.
Polona I love your haiga!! Your photography and words always match well!
new life! lovely--
pat and andrew - thanks!
Another lovely one.. as Aurora said elsewhere.. I am a big fan of your ku..
Sangeet
thank you, sangeet - that's very kind of you.
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