Ladybird Haiku

Saturday, March 25, 2006




*kuniharu shimizu's haiga with my haiku inspired by that particular tree, now missing, can be found here (the haiku could use some editing but it was one of the first i ever wrote)

10 Comments:

At 25/3/06 11:44 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your tanka are perfect! This one is exquisite.

 
At 26/3/06 5:39 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Maybe not exactly the sign you were looking for. Very good!

 
At 26/3/06 5:57 AM, Blogger Bill said...

I agree with aurora. Your mastery of tanka--a form with which I stuggle--is impressive.

 
At 26/3/06 8:46 AM, Blogger polona said...

pat: definitely not. thank you.
aurora and bill: thank you so much.

 
At 26/3/06 9:30 AM, Blogger Borut said...

Looking for signs...

 
At 26/3/06 10:07 AM, Blogger whitney said...

i was just thinking these thoughts the other day when i saw the willows down the road from my dorm.
lovely!

 
At 26/3/06 9:20 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, borut and whitney :)

 
At 26/3/06 10:22 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, alenka! if you're referring to the kuni-san's haiga, at least the definite article would be more appropriate...

 
At 27/3/06 1:13 AM, Blogger sangeet said...

Lovely tanka!

Sangeet

 
At 28/3/06 1:26 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, sangeet and andrew. :)

 

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