Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, April 09, 2006

spring evening
the groan of dry branches
in the south wind


pomladni večer
ječanje suhih vej
v južnem vetru

5 Comments:

At 9/4/06 10:13 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well done!

 
At 10/4/06 2:36 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Excellent haiga!!! Captured perfectly!!

 
At 10/4/06 10:51 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you both!
pat, technically it is not haiga as the words are not embedded in the image, but the idea was for the image and haiku to complement each other.

 
At 11/4/06 8:52 PM, Blogger Nick Zegarac said...

The groan - magnificent use of a word I never would have thought of in the context of this highly romanticised read. Bravo!

 
At 11/4/06 9:29 PM, Blogger polona said...

many thanks, nick!

 

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