Ladybird Haiku

Tuesday, December 05, 2006



strel iz puške...
race se razletijo
prek zimskega neba

21 Comments:

At 5/12/06 10:36 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Everything is perfect here - the colours, letter placement, flight of the birds. Love it. :)

 
At 5/12/06 10:49 PM, Blogger Matt said...

Good stuff.

(Hi Kai)

 
At 5/12/06 10:56 PM, Blogger Margie said...

I agree with Aurora...
It's all perfect Polona!
You are so talented!

Margie

 
At 5/12/06 11:23 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Yeah, gunshots tend to put me in flight too!! All matches perfectly!!

 
At 5/12/06 11:47 PM, Blogger Kai said...

good job!

hugs

(hi matt)

 
At 6/12/06 12:00 AM, Blogger get zapped said...

Very nice. The season rings out.

 
At 6/12/06 12:05 AM, Blogger Senile Butterfly said...

Good one, Polona.

 
At 6/12/06 1:40 AM, Blogger Grish said...

Yep if I only had wings...:)

 
At 6/12/06 2:18 AM, Blogger MB said...

Birds in flight... not easy to shoot with a camera. Nicely done.

 
At 6/12/06 3:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Awwwww! Wonderful work!

 
At 6/12/06 3:29 AM, Blogger Amy said...

oohh. i can hear the shot! and SEE it!

 
At 6/12/06 5:38 AM, Blogger Masago said...

I feel for those little critters.

 
At 6/12/06 10:10 AM, Blogger floots said...

takes me back to the marshes
thank you

 
At 6/12/06 10:37 AM, Blogger John McDonald said...

nice
john

 
At 6/12/06 3:10 PM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

polona, great gunshot, er, i mean shot. :)

 
At 6/12/06 4:31 PM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Excellent!

 
At 6/12/06 7:41 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh my! I never thought of the birds' pattern that way. Gunshots-
Wonderful!
(You inspired me to try some short poetry to accompany my photographs. I didn't make a main post of them yet. Instead I put them in my " GEL's Photo Gallery" on my website.)
Thank you for this courage, even though we never spoke of this.

 
At 6/12/06 9:33 PM, Blogger Tikkis said...

Every duck still flying,
the sky was wounded? :(

 
At 6/12/06 10:10 PM, Blogger Dan said...

Uh-oh! Dick Cheney is out having fun again.

 
At 7/12/06 10:43 AM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Pri tvojih haikujih mi včasih kar korak zastane, tako resničen je.

:)))

 
At 7/12/06 11:13 PM, Blogger polona said...

aurora: it's always nice to find such a perfect comment. thank you :)

matt: thank you.

margie: many thanks, margie. take care.

pat: we're not used to that kind of noise here. i don't know who triggered the shot but noone was hurt eventually. thank you!

kai: hugs to you too :-)

getzapped: thank you and welcome.

sb: thank you.

charlie: thank you.i almost ducked too :). fortunately, nobody got hurt as i said before.

bearded: yeah, the idea crossed my mind, too. but i hate reading out loud (besides, i'm a lousy reader even in slovenian) so that's out of the question for the time being.
thank you for your kind words.

grish: my thoughts exactly :)

mb: thank you.

jon: many thanks :)

amy: that's a fine compliment. thank you.

masago: i know... no casualties this time.

floots: you make me want to visit the marshes. thank you.

john: thank you.

dsnake: i would never shoot anything other than with the camera. thank you :)

gautami: many thanks.

gel: thank you. i'm honoured.
where can i find it?

tikkis: great thought. thanks :)

dan: oh no, how could they invite him here!

neikka: hvala za kompliment :)

 

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