Ladybird Haiku

Saturday, November 25, 2006



mrko nebo
veter mrši krila
mrtve vešče

19 Comments:

At 25/11/06 11:05 PM, Blogger Kai said...

perfect haiga

i beat evryone

 
At 25/11/06 11:40 PM, Blogger Dan said...

Poor moth! :(

Polona for president! ;)

 
At 26/11/06 12:42 AM, Blogger Matt said...

You nailed another perfect haiga again.

 
At 26/11/06 1:24 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Each line complements the other. And the image - well done!

 
At 26/11/06 3:07 AM, Blogger Masago said...

A grim ku (grimku?). Well done.

 
At 26/11/06 4:04 AM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

you captured it perfectly!

 
At 26/11/06 6:11 AM, Blogger trinitystar said...

november winds ruffles lovely ripple to this.
thank you for sharing. :o)

 
At 26/11/06 7:27 AM, Blogger Deepak Gopi said...

:)sad demise:( great pic
thanks for the visit.

 
At 26/11/06 7:27 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Enjoyed it. :)

 
At 26/11/06 7:34 AM, Blogger Margie said...

Excellent...as always... Polona!

Margie

 
At 26/11/06 9:26 AM, Blogger floots said...

a sad but perfect moment
well done

 
At 26/11/06 10:53 AM, Blogger John McDonald said...

nice
john

 
At 26/11/06 3:47 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

No resuscitation. Winter's cruelty so perfectly captured!!!

 
At 26/11/06 5:51 PM, Blogger Amalendu said...

well captured...

 
At 26/11/06 9:46 PM, Blogger Pris said...

This is one of my favorites yet!!

 
At 26/11/06 10:55 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, sweet kai! :-]

dan: thank you, but no thank you ;)

matt: thank you as always.

aurora: much appreciated. thank you.

masago: thank you.

andrew: appreciate that. thanks.

trinitystar: thank you for your lovely comments :)

deepak: just natural (they're not supposed to be out at this time of year anyway). thnak you.

grish: glad you did, thanks.

margie: many thanks :)

floots: just the nature's way... our perception makes it sad.
thank you.

john: thank you.

pat: we've been having an extraordinarily mild autumn but winter is ever present... thank you!

amalendu: thank you!

pris: wow, i'm honoured. thanks.

 
At 27/11/06 3:18 PM, Blogger DROBTINICE SVETLOBE said...

Krasna misel:)))

no llores hija
lluvia va a pasar
tiempo mejora

ne joči dekle
deževje bo minilo
čas se spreminja

 
At 27/11/06 4:56 PM, Blogger dsnake1 said...

captures the mood in those few words. :laden sky, november wind, dead moth.

 
At 27/11/06 11:37 PM, Blogger polona said...

kranti: thank you for your kind words.


neikka: hvala, dobrodošla kadarkoli.

i'll translate your poem:

don't cry, girl
the rain will pass
times are changing


dsnake: somewhat darker, but such is the season. thank you!

 

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