Ladybird Haiku

Tuesday, September 12, 2006

midday heat
belly button becomes
a tide pool

9 Comments:

At 12/9/06 3:45 PM, Blogger Masago said...

*LOL*

 
At 12/9/06 6:11 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Tooooo funny!!!!! An inland sea of sorts!!

 
At 12/9/06 7:42 PM, Blogger floots said...

too much information :)
(nice one - the poem that is
not seen the belly button)

 
At 13/9/06 1:18 AM, Blogger The Site Administrator said...

ha! makes me wonder what creatures inhabit the pool. ;-)

 
At 13/9/06 6:33 PM, Blogger Margie said...

Funny!
**smiles**

 
At 13/9/06 7:51 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

exquisite!

 
At 14/9/06 1:03 PM, Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

This one made me smile! :)))

 
At 14/9/06 2:31 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, everyone.
glad you enjoyed :)

 
At 26/9/06 8:17 PM, Blogger polona said...

there's something i'd like to add here.
this is just a different take on a much older idea... a friend of mine wrote about a similar experience some time ago (and i was aware of the existence of that haiku):

ebb tide
a small sea
only in my navel
Alenka Zorman

 

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