petals

you look me in the eyes
and ask, “what’s eating you?”
i could talk
about his ceaseless nagging
i could tell
about her wrapping
in a cocoon
of depression
i could speak
about a child
marked
her youth wasted
in the grasp
of a paedophile
“nothing,”
i say instead,
“it’s just…
i’ve seen a caterpillar
devouring the petals
of my favourite flowers”

14 Comments:
Very well done!! :o) I'd be upset as well! I really like this one. :o) Thank you so much!! I really like my choice of color in the 2nd painting as well. Thank you again! :o)
WOW!!!!!!!!! Great poem!!!
Well done, Polona!
Good stuff here I really did enjoy myself.
polona,
That was wonderful!
I really enjoyed it!
a wonderful fragment
of a tragic story
like a strobe light -
just for a second
we see it
thank you
charlie - i believe there's some beauty in every beast and vice versa. thanks.
jon - thank you and you're welcome!
pat - what can i say... i'm grateful for your passionate comment! thanks!!
aurora - many thanks!
david - thank you and welcome. pleased you enjoyed.
samuru - thank you very much!
floots - thank you. life is not just flowers and butterflies...
I like this :)
I really like this.
andrew and pris - thank you both!
Nice flower!
thanks, vaughn - the problem is, it doesn't smell very nice...
different...
i like it
yes, kai, quite different... thanks.
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