Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, June 11, 2006

just something i've been playing with...

What She Wants

sunburnt face
and a swollen knee
a few years ago
she would have given anything
to raise the winner's cup
but now
all she craves
is a hot shower
a cold beer
and a keyboard.

8 Comments:

At 12/6/06 12:51 AM, Blogger Kai said...

nice....
how r u?

 
At 12/6/06 3:39 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ha! I love this one.:)

 
At 12/6/06 8:03 AM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I suppose that this is you? Really nice!

 
At 12/6/06 8:18 AM, Blogger Borut said...

A fine combination, just how to have all the three at the same time:)

 
At 12/6/06 8:59 AM, Blogger floots said...

i liked this
strange how priorities change
(borut's comment made me smile too - take care not to slip or you might spill the beer) :)

 
At 12/6/06 1:14 PM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Polona sounds like priorities I can live with!! Love this!!

 
At 12/6/06 11:26 PM, Blogger polona said...

kai - thanks... i'm busy.

aurora - thank you as always :)

tim - the older i get the more i value the simple pleasures... thank you.

andrew - yep, this is sort of autobiographical :)

borut - i can imagine shower and beer or keyboard and beer, but don't think i'd try all three at the same time... thanks! :)

floots - thank you!
guess that comes with age...
i'd look after my beer, don't worry (people from gorenjska where i come from have a similar reputation as the scots do over at your place)

pat - thank you!
as long as there's enough beer...

 
At 14/6/06 11:13 PM, Blogger polona said...

sangeet, thanks!

 

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