Ladybird Haiku

Sunday, February 26, 2006

powdered morning
a dove’s fluff
joins the snowflakes


belo jutro
grličin puh se
pridruži snežinkam

7 Comments:

At 26/2/06 8:42 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nicely done.:)

 
At 26/2/06 11:04 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, aurora.
alenka, i see them through my window almost every day... a pair seems to have fallen in love :)

 
At 27/2/06 3:39 AM, Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Excellent!

 
At 27/2/06 8:41 PM, Blogger Nick Zegarac said...

Some very interesting imagry in both pieces. I particularly appreciate the dove/snowflake stuff.

 
At 27/2/06 10:14 PM, Blogger polona said...

thank you, pat and nick.

 
At 28/2/06 4:53 PM, Blogger Pan Haiku Review said...

I really like that first line! It's been powder snow today in Bradford-on-Avon in England. No doves, but I think the ducks will approve!

almost lost
in the shimmer of water
several ducklings

 
At 28/2/06 8:49 PM, Blogger polona said...

thanks, alan, for your visit and the hint of spring you brought with your lovely haiku.

 

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