frozen pond
the ducks gathered
'round the spring
zamrznjen ribnik
race so zbrane
okrog izvira
a version of this haiku first posted on Borut's blog in January 06
posted by polona @ 20:59
Saturday, February 18, 2006
frozen pond
the ducks gathered
'round the spring
zamrznjen ribnik
race so zbrane
okrog izvira
a version of this haiku first posted on Borut's blog in January 06
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2 Comments:
I like the double meaning of the word "spring" here - spring meaning water they are gathering around, or the season of spring that they are anticipating. Very good layering.
many thanks, aurora, for your kind words.
you're right, Matjaž... this is just a slightly altered version from what I posted on Borut's Spotted Woodpecker blog in January.
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